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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Sun raidates beams Uncountable beams within Like a warm shower |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this is really nice..warm, cozy... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks thought that one up when I sunbathing, i'm gonna miss summer  "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a nice image--I liked the last line. Elizabeth |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maria, I also mourn the passing of the summer, but now I have this, your beautiful haiku to remind me of the summers radiant, glorious Sun! Nice one! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Lovely.  |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Makes me wish I was a cat..  With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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