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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Sitting legs crossed on a chair, my puny hands stretched out in search for companionship Everyone chats animatedly, their gestures aplenty, too busy to care |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, A sharp contrast between the lonely and the busy blind, But the gulf is not as big as it may seem. Time to build a bridge! Thoughtful poem. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
so much said here in a few words..well done. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Kaile; How about you go over and just say "Hi!"....good job here. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Certainly a poem for our times Kaile. I empathise with this okay... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Kaile, Oh hon. I truly know this feeling. I know how hard it is to just say hi. A friend of mine once told me when I was keeping to myself to just place myself in the area where the crowd is at and smile. I'm sure you have a beautiful smile. Someone will surely see it and want to say hi back to the person behind the smile.  Dawn |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
In a crowded room your verse reaches out to me, finding a new friend. I so enjoy reading your work, kaile. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like this protrays loneiness perfectly "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
That is so not well done of your friends!? How could they leave anyone out?  Uh... I hope of coz, that you're not referring to our small group...  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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