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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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So softly sunrise Sends such sweet summoning scents Satisfaction sighs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Such sweet succulence surrounds such summers sunrise sending scents soaring Marge; a beautiful one here, andwhile i'm at it...thanks once again, for all you delicous replies to my poems. Love, Ellie [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
And summers' morning Its beauty give way to the Waiting summer's day. Beautiful haiku, Marge!!  You paint the perfect picture of a potently precious sunrise...  Hmm...now what if after the sun's rising a knight gets a big surprise...there's an idea... Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Floral scent bouquet Floating through the morning air Morning freshness stirs Ah yes, Another fresh start to a brand new day! Beautiful, Marge! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Wonderful response ! SpyroT~ Thank you for the reply. Nicely done. Dennis~ I appreciate your poetic response. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
a wonderful haiku, i really dug it. i really like your use of alliteration (i believe that's the right word for reptition of the beginning consonant sound, if not, i just sound like a fool now....oh well) "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RichPa~ Sounds so sweetly sung Repetitiously resound  Alliteration ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Marge! Thanks for sharing a bit of sunshine from the sunhine state! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Softly shining sun < !signature-->shining sweetly since soaring sunshine, swing silent Ah Marge, love your stuff! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Orange blossomed morning Magnificient magnolia Sunrise scents wafting ~*~ Karilea~ Sunshine of your name Spread your beauty on this day Light up the dawning ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
hey, i really dig that alliteration haiku! "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...delightful... regards, sudhir |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
You've got me 'sighing' again, Marge .... 'S' So good to read you, again ! (Hugs) |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Witty usage of alliteration, Marge....very nice! ...chanson~~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~ |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Yes, very lovely this. Full of nice sensuous sunny feelings... Thank you... allan  sun honey spreads gold kissing the sky with warming another day dawns [This message has been edited by allan (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
 Simplistic and beautiful.. I love it! With a little piece of tomorrow, You'll have to kiss yesterday goodbye. Because today won't last forever, And the past will only make you cry. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RichPa~ Early worm of morn Digging through tunnel to light Good morning, sunshine ! Sudhir~ Delight of your smile Resting gently on my face You set me aglow Pepper~ Unbelievable ! Face of friend through God's blessings You light up this day ! Chanson~ Tiny prismed light Shines across summer meadow Laughing merrily Allan~ Honey-buttered sky Drips lazily across morn Scrumpdiliumpcious ! BrokenWingedAngel~ A one-winged angel Flies in circles overhead Lighting in my heart *Thank you all .. you make it so much fun to write ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Marge....Can't possibly reply to the first without including all of the rest. These are all so wonderful, I'm feeling refreshed already just reading them this humid NY morning. Thanks!! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Heart's humid humming Air conditioning the thought Of others sharing *Thank you, sweet lady ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge, this is so creative...i challenge you to write more such haikus, one for each letter of the alphabet |
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