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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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For Andrew Why does love bite? Why does it cost so much? Why do these tears...burn? Once was told, “tomorrow shall be ours, my love I shall, we shall, forever.” Why given these lies? Why did she...I’m broken. Why am I worthless, betrayed? Once was told, “our future is bright and shiny I shall love thee, forever.” Why this horrible death? Why am I broken, cold, dead? Why is the pain...burning again? Once was told, “We have a love eternal our plans will last, forever.” Now, so much ashes on my brain the future is garbage, thrown away all seems so very lost, broken. Father to father am told, “Don’t give up, time will heal never forget...you are loved, forever.” bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Dan, Lovely are your words in poem but so sad, your heart from which they came. Remember, it's always darkest before dawn & Andrew's Dad loves him very much, as you penned your heart in this poem. You will be in my prayers. Love, Marcy |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is just beautiful, and very timely for me. Both of my sons are in the same place as Andrew, one was engaged for 2 years, the other only going out for a few months...but, the same heartache. I've tried to talk to them, but now I will show them this...if you don't mind. You have written a wonderful poem, so full of heartfelt feeling. Thanks for sharing it. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Daniel~ Dad's are like that - Yeah, they are ! '“Don’t give up, time will heal never forget...you are loved, forever.” Sound advice, dad ! A big hug to 'son'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Thank you ladies for the imput and support. It tears a parent up to see a child going through what we know to be the worst emotional pain there is, eh? Thanks again... bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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