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Dawn Haiku |
Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Calm lake is mirrored Reflecting dawns arrival Silent echoes stir |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; You have captured the essence of that quiet magical time, right before dawn. I love the silence that only comes at that time of day! Love, Sis Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dennis, Good job! You put me right there, if only for a brief moment. Thanks, King Haiku! Love, Marcy |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Very well done Dennis, this is great. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Dennis, Excellent imagery! ...chanson~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Truly delightful ... I shall watch for it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Brother, You certianly excell at these and your lush imagery is lucious to the senses. Great job! David WOW- another day of life-and here among friends! Ain't God Grand! |
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