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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Not titled I cry for me, More, I cry for you More still, I cry for us I am lost in a world That barely knows my name I am lost in a love That cannot define love I am lost in blind trust Merely for trusting myself I cannot seem to define The boundaries of soul But mind? The boundaries of mind Are all too obvious. Can't find an ending. Does anyone have any ideas? Luv Y'all, Hope u njoy! Alicia [This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you said it yourself already... can't find an ending we live on life's carousal looking for the brass ring we'll never find so?  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Here is the ending I suggest which helps put a upbeat conclusion: So in love's maze go I Hoping afterwhile I may come to myself And then find you once again Ready to leave the maze And find our solid ground! |
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