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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
walking in the rain, one day i was pondering those imponderables, those things we wonder about our lives things like love, inner-peace and why orange juice tastes so bad after you brush your teeth, when, all of a sudden a rain drop stood up and spoke to me, "je suis..." "french i do not speak,"i interrupted "i am so terribly sorry," said he "'tis alright,"said i. "please do go on" "i am a rain drop," he did declare "oh yes,"i said. "that i can see, what is it that you want with me?" "well, it is human i wish to be, and who better to teach me than those who that be?" on this i did think and replied with care, "a cow, maybe?" "no!,"he cried. "you are human, me you can teach!" "ok, why?," i then said "humans have it great," he replied. "a life of emotions, they get to live!" "oh," said i. "if you say so" "you speak as if me you don't believe" he cried "i'ld rather be a rain drop," replied i on that note, walk away he did, mumbling all the while made him angry, i must have, i then thought oh well, i thought, and went to take a nap, i did "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
This is quite an interesting dialogue, to be a raindrop. (I once wrote about being a leaf  I look forward to reading more of you, rich-pa....chanson~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i like this, very creative! ~Dawn |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What an imagination you have! This is delightful! Denise |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was great, I enjoyed it a lot. Huh, looks like it's about to rain... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
lol well you made me think... a raindrop exists forever..it comes..lands..evaporates only to someday form again...so I am with you I wouldn't mind being a raindrop.. ~~soft smiles *hope no scientist comes and bursts my bubble  Maureen |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Good job writing. Great flow and what creativity!! I have always heard the grass looks greener in someone else's pasture. Marcy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RichPa~ LOL !  'why orange juice tastes so bad after you brush your teeth' Don't think I've ever seen this poetic reference before ! Clever. But, truth IS truth. It DOES taste awful !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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