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not worth a buck...

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-08-23 04:46 AM

Some seek me, their prize
My rack, my pride and demise--
What's the "point" of this?

I wave a white flag
But 'tis not of surrender--
Only of "Good-bye!"

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-08-23 04:59 AM

Marvelous! Tis very en-deer-ing and I don't mean to "faun", but I surely agree it's not worth the "doe"! Really lovely, bro! love, Sis

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

2 posted 2000-08-23 09:15 AM

Thank you ellie for my clue! Very, very, very clever David and very, very good.

Oh, you get a AA+ on this one. Marcy

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

3 posted 2000-08-23 01:02 PM

Hi again, Let me back up, my above reply made it sound like I didn't understand your great Haiku, but I did..after reading Ellie's reply....for I was going on "emotions", and I thought you were "being emotional", "throwing in the white flag"; see, that is the sign of a GREAT poem! Your emotions got my attention. Oh, well, I hope I have explained, not got myself buried here{smile}

. One of the best I have seen. Love, Marcy

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-08-23 01:59 PM

David,

Yes, my tail is white
I don't want to grace your den
Sticking my neck out!

Write on brother!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

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