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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Do you ever feel lost, like you aren't there even in front of the mirror? Softly travel in the mist of morn With wanderings from my nighttime past A road to nowhere, with nothing thoughts The chill in the air reaches out at last Grabs and holds, won't release it's grip As smiles in the day just pass me by Is it age, or miles, or time memories The desperate thunder as tears fall from sky Land on cheeks and roll gently down 'Til taste of saltiness reaches my lips No imagined knight nor shadow in dark Can heal when memory relapses and slips Into the old routine filled with naught Silence is golden, when empty is sought M |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
This is almost haunting. I felt the lostness as I read it. Your pen has served you well here girl, but then again it always does. Juls |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
mm - Wow, haunting is right! The last line speaks volumes. There are too many days when I stand in front of the mirror and have similar thoughts, but never could I have expressed them as you have done so beautifully here. Bonnie |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Juls...these were not written this day..but in this past year so maybe all these feelings I had were there warning me of what was to happen.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bonnie..I was just rereading poems..my mind won't let me write at the moment so I was searching for those that I feel I could be writing today. thank you for your nice comments ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
MMoonchild, Sad filled yes, I really like this line, Silence is golden, when empty is sought, I'll keep you in my thoughts. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think your feelings are very well expressed in this one M, thanks for letting us all take a peek at it. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Cerenity thank you..that is a strange line now that I reread it ~~soft smiles M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lakewalker just a little peek every now and then..  ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Not strange at all, Maureen, that's one of my favorite lines. I knew exactly what you were saying. Wonderful writing! Denise |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Denise thank you again ~~soft hugs M |
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