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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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the scent of the water drifts up wet, mossy and crisp as it sparkles in diamond drops captured by the sun's rays for a moment of rainbows and faint echos of olden times as a beautiful creature dances 'neath the waterfall in the Faerie Wood her form lithe and glistening like dew covered grass swayed by the breeze on a summer morn she moves to the song that only she can hear the song Earth sings to her her hair cascades down her body in ripples of firey red wet and curling clinging to her shape hinting at what lies beneath she knows not of her great beauty or her appeal to life-worn eyes she only dances and sings to ease the bubbling of joy that wells up in her heart like a mountain spring after a winter's rainy season Vivian Greene ~It is not our circumstances that create our discontent or contentment. It is us.~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful..you have a way of painting the scenery with your imagery...very nice work!! take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Beautiful work, Vivian! Like Janet said, you really do paint a "vivid" picture...hehe  I wish I could write this well in free verse...wow...  Great piece!  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Vivian????????? you must have me mixed up with someone else LOL ~X~ |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
This makes me long for the mountains. Quite beautiful! |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Whoops!! I could've sworn that was your name LOL Near the bottom before the quote, it says 'Vivian Greene'... Sorry if I messed it up! -L.S. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful! I agree with everyone else, a vivid picture you paint with your words! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This made me smile...I like the image of this Faerie singing and dancing at the beginning of spring.. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sigh....X Angel...after reading this, I know I will never be able to write free verse as you do (and tha't's ok ) Love this one ! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Will you ever return? I do hope so. I miss your free verse M'Lady! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ I'm with you ... Heather ... we MISS YOU~ This is sooooooo beautifully done~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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