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Sweet Sunrise (Haiku)

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

0 posted 2000-08-21 08:59 AM

Summer morning sun
peeking over the hillside,
an orange blossom dawn

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-08-21 09:18 AM

Oh Bonnie this is so lovely. Such a beautiful picture I see as I read it. What a way to start my day.
Juls

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-08-21 02:53 PM

Bonnie,
You just keep getting better and better at this form of poetry!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-08-21 05:30 PM

WOW! Bonnie, This is breathtaking! A winner
for sure. You are so good at haikuing! Love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-08-21 05:43 PM

I can just see it, it's so beautiful! Thanks for the chance to read this

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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5 posted 2000-08-21 08:08 PM

Another beauty, Bonnie!

Denise

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2000-08-21 08:38 PM

Oh, Bonnie~

Talk about orange blossom dawns ...
I'm surrounded by orange groves on three
sides of my acreage ... not only do I get
to see the sun come up over the lake ...
but, in season, to smell that glorious fragrance !

HEAVENLY !

I loved the memory this brought to mind.
LOVELY !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2000-08-22 08:17 AM

very nice.esp liked the words "orange blossom"

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

8 posted 2000-08-22 07:25 PM

Bonnie, This is great and I too liked your term "orange blossom dawn". Marcy

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