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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
twilight Summer breeze blows the firey full moon off the placid lake I am surprised and pleased to see so many poets posting haiku, senryu, and tanka. They are my preferred formats. I enjoy the limitations of form which force me into clarity of expression. To persue a mastery of the Japanese form, is to seek true eloquence. Rave on, dear poets and capture the moment! INclan |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nicely written! wonderful mind picture this paints  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww what lovely pictures come to mind. And I've fallen in love with hauki too. Posted my first ones lastnight. And I'm sooooooooo hooked, hehe. Juls |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a great haiku! Thanks for sharing it with us |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you, dgvarner, juliet_2u, and Lakewalker. The inspiration came while sitting by a vacation campfire, last week. Thank you again for reading..... |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
INclan, We also appreciate your talented haiku postings here! Write on my friend, Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Lovely lovely haiku, takes me into a nice cool dream... Beautiful... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, INclan! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Eloquently done capturing the true essence these few words delight! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
INclan- This is very nice...I like it lots. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome back INclan, missed your haiku lots!! this one is a beauty as always...now pls do post more before you disappear, okay  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
twilight Summer breeze blows the firey full moon off the placid lake capturing it's warmth welcoming arms of the breeze float the rising sun just fooling around...trying to capture another view enjoying your haiku (love the moon) ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
Wonderful, INclan..... it puts me in the mood for a quiet spot to relax. I so enjoy your work, and hope to see more again soon. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thank you Dennis, for your kind encouragement. Thank you for reading Allan. Thank you Denise. Thank you Ellie, I also liked your inspiration. Thank you vlraynes. Thank you kaile, I promise to post more. Hopefully, I will not be "leaving" for a LONG time. Thank you MMoonchild, Rave on I say...feel free to mess around all you like. Thank you Joannak, what a pleasent surprise. I really like your work as well. I hope to see you posting more. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I appreciate this vivid image. Very nice, INclan! (I, too, am fond of the brevity of the form, having to focus deeply on a particular picture. ....chanson~ |
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