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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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'are you ok' a lie...'yes' and I smile in reassurance denying the pain in my soul but look closer do you see my eyes the truth is written there- the loneliness I feel... the acceptance I long for... but how could you know you didn't see my eyes- I wish you had -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-20-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How few really look at us, and try to get to know the real person. This poem is so sad and so lovely. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ellie- thanks so much for reading. your kind words mean alot.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
some see and dont want to..some dont see and later wish they had.. keep your eyes open..thats where the honesty of the heart lies for those who would see.. hugs! dg"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is very well written, I enjoyed having the chance to read it |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- so true that is. thanks for the response. hugs back to you. love yaLakewalker- thanks so much for your loyal responses to my posts. i really appreciate your input. love you guys, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
The eyes do tell the whole story don't they?. Very lovely piece here Vicky. Juls |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Juls- Yes, the eyes speak volumes if we will only listen. Thanks for reading and responding. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Meg Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 12Manila, Philippines |
I know what you're saying. I feel it too. Thanks for sharing your poetry. Keep up the good work. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
The windows of your soul....keep um bright. Jon |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Oh how I wish the world would learn to look at the windows to a person's soul. So many see my wheelchair and forget about the person in the wheelchair. Thanks for sharing. Dawn |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
It's a rare and wonderful thing when someone is able to see into anothers soul! And it's so sad when they don't..... You said it well Vicky< !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Meg- Thanks so much for reading and responding. Really glad you liked. Jon- Thanks for the words of encouragement. Your replies are always appreciated. Dawn- Oh, so true. So sorry that some people don't bother to see who you really are. I see a very special person with a great deal of talent and heart. Thanks somuch for your response. Sheri- Yes...very rare indeed. Too many people just don't want to take the time to look that close. Thanks so much for reading. Glad you liked it. love you all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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