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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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In Return Inside my heart aches at the love I found tonight which can not be shared Forever Searching Fight to understand The inward feelings I have, But I'll never see |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Beautiful, I really like this. Welcome to the Pub! Alicia |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Lakewalker...I can relate to anything having to do with a heart aching! This is really a moving poem........beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well done!  Denise |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ditto! so much expressed within these words |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked them |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Why is it that poets bleed words? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LakeWalker~ These are both extremely well-done Senryu's. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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