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The Little Angel |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The Little Angel A little angel floated down With creamy wings and halo crown Descending through the morning dew And settled there within my view She looked at me with cherub face And hovering steady in one place She played upon a tiny harp Such wondrous music in the dark The glow of halo lit her face A smile so sweet and full of grace As I upon my pillow lay Let little angel fingers play She plucked a song that ever rings So tenderly upon the strings This magic music raptured me Into a sense of ecstacy These tunes so dear filled with delight Like crystal prisms in the night Filled the room with rainbow hymns Of music chords I felt within Never had one played like this With resonating chords of bliss What caused an angel to appear To play sweet music in my ear Then in a wink she sped away Just upon the break of day I knew that this was not a dream This angel sweet with wings of cream Perhaps the angel came to me And played a hymn exquisitely So that my heart would be thereof Prepared to follow her above But ‘twas not so, for on that day ‘Twas hymns of joy the cherub played For very early on that morn My baby grandson had been born |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Breathtakingly Beautiful and I believe! Make that, I know! Marcy |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Elizabeth this is amazing! This really took my breath away...What a glorious day it is when a baby is born!.....beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
a wonderful, warm poem..outstanding piece. bravo! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Another masterpiece here, it's breath taking |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your baby grandson had been born Anounced by a cherubs flugelhorn? Your poem is just beautiful forgive the pun. Love ya Sy |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a marvelous flow and melodic feel you've woven here Liz! Simply beautiful ... wisked me away for a little while with this darling angel. Lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
hehe....this reminds me a lot of my angel, a_little_girl...she's just as beautiful as this poem, as well as the music. You did an excellent job on this, Elizabeth! Thanks for the incredible read. Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Lizzie~ You always do it .. just right ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Liz; nothing so wonderful as becoming a grandmother, and your poem heralds that so perfectly! love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I appreciate each one of your responses. Thank you so much, everyone Liz |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Elizabeth, This poem is absolutely beautiful, the blessing of children alone is amazing, yet your poem brings the event to life with such a wonderful grace. : ) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lost Dreamer, Thank you for your beautiful comment. The birth of a child is so beautiful and when my first grandson was born I thought I heard angels singing LOve Liz |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A Wonderful piece Elizabeth. Jon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Elizabeth, this is charming and angelic! I love it! Just precious! Denise |
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