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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I will lift my eyes for today To see that I'm alone I will hold my hands out for you But you will still be gone Oh and I will drink the water And live another day I will travel onward To see what comes this way Yes I know that I am lonely I know that I'm afraid But if I had known you I know I'd stayed away Oh and I will cross the fires If I can stand the pain I will go on waiting To see if you come again Yes I know that I am wanting I know that it won't last If I only knew myself I wouldn't have this past I will close my eyes for tonight And know that you're not here I will lend my lips to kiss you Then your ghost will disappear |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Bob, This was wonderful and yes you can put it music, very much enjoyed. And welcome to passions. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I liked this,Bob, nice job..  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thank you both for reading and taking the time to reply!!! Cerenity, I would certainly put it to music *sigh* if only I could! *lol* erm, besides I think though my singing may cause some permanent damage! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wob..definate lonliness here..we all do this i think..we take what we know isnt good for us while its willing to be there, because its what we really believe we want..we wait for it, we rearrange our lives for it...and when it comes we are elated..and when it goes, we long for it terribly.... anyway, thats what i got out of this one..i hope i'm not so totally "off"! very good..nice writing dg"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
WHB, That heartache kicked in and you put out this sad love poem...good job. marcy |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Bob, Nice writing here, and I hope with this poem some of the pain was released. |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Very emotional. Nice work, I love it! Alicia |
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