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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Tornado warnings Blue black clouds descended here Rained golfball sized hail Cloud edges turned pink Surrounded by a blue sea Magnificent sight |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oooohhh, sounded scary in the before one there, but very nice in the after. I like 'em  |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
DITTO!! very nice haiku there! I gotta try some of that  stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Maureen, Ah, the calm afer the storm, Good contrast here and Good Haiku! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lakewalker thank you. it was scarey here last fall too... as we never have tornados and the weather has changed drastically in what's called normal right now ...I saved the hail as did most the town ...it was huge boucing of the streets..but it is evaporating in the freezer ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I must confess, when I first saw before and after, I wasn't thinking about storms.. loved it anyway..lolthe woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Maureen! Denise |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
~~Lavada~~ try them they really aren't hard at all and are usually so descriptive in so few words and Dennis..thank you, Mr.Haiku...I spent months haikuing back and forth with other poet friends..and loved it..this and the other were two I did just on my own..if I can get their permission I will post a group of them ~~soft smiles M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
pegasus111 *  I think I did that on purpose as I notice many titles on here have nothing to do with the poems words.....got your attention though didn't I~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Denise...thank you as always ~~softly Maureen |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
MMoonchild, for one who prefer to indulge in meter and rhyme, moi think you write excellent haiku too....lovely description within these few lines |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
kaile thank you...this made me feel a little happier tonight..I love all forms of poetry and usually can accomplish any I try... I haven't done a senyru in a long time maybe I will try one next.... Maureen |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Ahhhhh, the moment! But like so many things....you have to be there. I understand the fear and the beauty. Thank you for being in that moment to share it with the rest of us. INclan |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
INclan interesting name..thank you.... ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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