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Koon
Junior Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 43
Singapore

0 posted 2000-08-13 05:54 AM

Rays of sunlight shine
Memories left behind
I know I'll be fine
Because life will be kind

All the pain that you've caused
Is now forgotten and tossed
You'll hurt me no more
For I've spread my wings and soared

I gave you all my heart
But you just tore it apart
Now I take back my life
Towards my freedom, now I strive

And so in time you'll see
That the loss is with thee
And a winner is what I'd be
So don't come running back to me

Koon-

Nikolette Sadness

Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 337
port richey fl.

1 posted 2000-08-13 05:59 AM

i like this very much and i am very tired...and i think i may be dead...oh wait theres my pulse!
heheh
*hyper*

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Koon
Junior Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 43
Singapore

2 posted 2000-08-13 06:03 AM

I'm glad you liked it even though you're like almost dead.......

Koon-

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-08-13 11:26 AM

Sorta sad ......but nicely put.

Jon

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-08-13 12:16 PM

Very nicely said, sorry this has to happen. Thanks for the good read

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

5 posted 2000-08-14 08:39 AM

I just recently had my heart ripped from my chest and stomped on, so I can relate. Everyone keeps saying that time heals..I'm sure it does. I have yet to find that out. The good thing is that you find that you have more strength than you ever knew you had! Pain is only weakness leaving your body......beth< !signature-->

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

[This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 08-15-2000).]

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

6 posted 2000-08-15 01:17 AM

This is beautiful.. sad, and strong, but still hurting.. it's good u can push away past, to get on with everything.. it's also good not to be bitter about it tho.. *_^ Lovely poem..

Love,
Lynne

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

7 posted 2000-08-15 11:03 AM

I admire your positive attitude from such a beautifully written sad love poem. Marcy

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