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Baby in the Pocket Haiku

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-12 10:37 AM

Your pocket is full
bouncing around down under
baby peeking out

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-08-12 10:44 AM

Ellie~

I love what you do
With a bouncing Kangaroo
Peek-a-boo Haiku !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-12 10:49 AM

Great Haiku

It's so you!

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

3 posted 2000-08-12 10:52 AM

Sis,
We are on the same wave length today, I wrote this and was waiting to post it later but you JUMPED ahead of me again and posted first ! Here is my version:

Mighty legs and tail
You jump in great leaps and bounds
Joey in your pouch

Write on SIS!
Dennis :^)< !signature-->

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-12-2000).]

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

4 posted 2000-08-13 12:23 PM

heehee..when i think of baby 'roos, i think of my 2yr old...'cause her name is joie

very cute 'roo haiku(s)!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

5 posted 2000-08-13 12:36 PM

makes me want to head right down to Australia!

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-08-14 08:47 PM

This is really cute, Ellie!

Denise

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

7 posted 2000-08-18 02:00 PM

i thought this was going to be about the toy Polly Pocket cos of the title but this reads more Jumpily interesting!!

btw, i like the title lots..thats was what attracted me to this haiku

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

8 posted 2000-08-18 08:12 PM

You socked it to the pocket-
I for one won't knock it--
Another good one, Sis!
David

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