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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Crying Tears of Dry Just for the kissing alone, her tears of want would moisten her eyes remembering the whom, of the touching so soft remembering the how of the rainbow painted hearts remembering the what of the comforting light that comes from the darkness within you. Just for the touching alone her lips of want would produce a smile remembering the first seconds of the eyes to meet remembering the first minutes of the hearts in sync remembering the first hours laying in the arms of night sharing in the lavender veil that is you Just for the nearness alone her mind of want would produce the thoughts remembering the first nightdreams of the blending as one remembering the first realdreams of the caress in your touch remembering the first daydreams that follow, even now as I dwell in your lips when nearness of you touches me. M 8*2k |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is beautiful. I love it! Dawn |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Beautifully written...makes me want to go back to the days of Chivalry! 'Cept, there would be no deoderant in that time, and I don't think anybody would be that close!  Great Poem...I liked it very much! ~~Jamie "I keep breaking all the promises That I keep making to myself You'd think by now that I'd be over this Instead I'm feeling sorry for myself So wh |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful work! Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautifully done! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nicely written  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Callie funny how you can have a rotten night... yet a poem can survive it... ~~softsmiles M |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Wow!!! hehe...couldn't have put this poem into better words myself (but then again, I'm not very good at that anyway)...  Great job, Moonchild! Little Spyro T. Dragon Watching the poets Passions' guardian dragon Moves with the rhymes' flow. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
A beautiful poem, so full of romance divine! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Wikket too funny ~~softly laffin' Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Liz Denise dg thank you each for making my day a bit brighter ~~softly smiling Maureen |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Phew.. this is sooooo amazing.. love that picture.. ohmygosh, I REALLY, REALLY like this one.. just beautiful!! ^_^ Love, Lynne |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Little_Spyro Oh I am sure you could have... Little Dragon thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
ellie..thank you for getting the feel of it..elsewhere I posted it every response thought it was sad old memories when actually it is now and not sad..just thoughts when apart ~~soft smiles M |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
If it's not supposed to be sad...than why am I crying? A recent (first) broken heart, perhaps..this poem really touched my heart and moved me (to tears!) . This really is a wonderful poem.......beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Lynne ...so glad you like this one I am writing about a love and how the thoughts alone and the nearness of him can dry up my tears of sad ~~sogtly smiling Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
beth with emotions like yours you are not a lost lady..you are just waiting the knight to come and sweep you off your feet ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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