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Just Hanging Haiku

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-09 02:35 PM

Upside down you hang
Waiting for the cool night breeze
Black wing sightless flight

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2000-08-09 02:39 PM

love this!! this may be one of my favorites heehee

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

2 posted 2000-08-09 04:11 PM

Dennis...I just bought a house for these little critters....You have done them justice with this. Bonnie

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-08-09 04:16 PM

As always, a wonderful Haiku shared by you! I hate the pesky critters, but it's still good

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

4 posted 2000-08-09 06:16 PM

Bro; I almost missed this wonderful gem!
This one has me "batty" with haiku fever!
You're fabulous at this! Love, Sis

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2000-08-09 09:46 PM

Dennis-
Love this one. AWESOME!!

-vicky

"...until you have read the verse on
his heart, you have not truely met
the poet. -vlraynes

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

6 posted 2000-08-09 10:38 PM

seeking bugs to eat
the mosquitos you keep down
your're not thanked enough

great job dennis

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

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