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Laughing Spider -haiku-( my first Pub Post) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven ![]() |
Laughing Spider On a single thread a spider sways in the wind unheard laughter seen Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
wow...i could actually picture that spider laughing...good job.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent Haiku Master! ![]() |
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MaryArlet Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15Phoenix, Arizona, USA |
That is fantastic!! Thanks for sharing that with us, and I look forward to reading more of your work!! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
awesome haiku jamie! i love that the spider is laughing!! dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jamie- Gotta love those laughing spiders. Great job!! Welcome to the pub. ![]() -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Excellent Jamie!! Absolutley! ![]() |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Prometheus, A delightful Haiku, though it is kind of chilling thinking of a laughing spider! Well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nice one...but hey Dennis I've never seen a sad spider either ![]() Jon |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Spiderman, Spiderman From the friendly Neighbourhood Ever Smiling Spiderman ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ![]() ![]() ........ Hey Jamie, Teach me will you? how to write one... You write such wonderfully well that I am afraid I will never learn to be on equal terms... in haiku poetry... but then what cares equality? regards to a wonderful poet... Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Prometheus~ Spider merrily Swinging from vine in the tree No Tarzan is he ! Arachnophobic Breeze from can of RAID ensues Spider must know fate For the life of me I honestly cannot see Dead spider, laughing ! ![]() ![]() ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow, I got goosebumps reading this one, I am petrified of those 8 legged little creatures, and if reading this gave me the willies....it must be great. Bonnie |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
My apologies to one and all for neglecting to thank each of you for the wonderful and kind replies.....I saw a spider swinging in the wind and thought, people would have such great fun with that....so why not the spider? Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Excuse me Prometheus...But have to say to Marge on the last haiku: (For the life of me I honestly cannot see Dead spider, laughing !) ROTFLMAO!!! Hilarious Marge. |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a nice piece of tranquility here....and welcome to the pub!! ![]() ![]() |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
prometheus! I love this! hehe, what a cheerful spider.. laughter in the wind.. *_^ Welcome 2 the pub.. hehe Love, Lynne |
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