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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

0 posted 2000-08-07 09:23 PM


big black waiting dog
rests his old warn down legs on
the back porch tonight


I love my dog

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allan
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 620
On the road
1 posted 2000-08-08 02:13 PM


I loved this - just loved it...  

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-08-08 11:54 PM


been chasing rabbits
till he got plum tuckered out
don't blame him a bit



Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".



childomine
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
3 posted 2000-08-09 07:42 AM


This is so sweet.  I can picture him sitting there, panting and looking weary but willing to jump up and run some more, if his master wishes it.  So much said in so few words!!  
Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

4 posted 2000-08-09 08:59 AM


Dogs are so nice ...faithful,loyal and funny.

Great snapshot.

Jon

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2000-08-09 05:10 PM


heehee..you and jamie make a good writing team!  

this poem just makes me wanna say, nothin like a good dog..  

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
6 posted 2000-08-10 08:12 AM


Lakewalker,
  
Dog waits on the porch
With laboured pants and tail wags
For his masters smile

GOOD ONE! Gotta love 'em!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

CowgirlFreedom17
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since 2002-05-20
Posts 82
Mississippi
7 posted 2002-05-20 01:36 AM


Ah, dogs are quite the best.  I respect them for many reasons. I like this image. Very good ^_^

Daisy~*


[This message has been edited by CowgirlFreedom17 (05-20-2002 01:38 AM).]

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
8 posted 2003-01-06 12:37 PM


Heh, what an image. ^^ I love the "worn down legs" (It is meant to be worn down, isn't it? not warn down???)

-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

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