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MaryArlet Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15Phoenix, Arizona, USA |
reality wins tears now fill my empty soul alone once again |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
Wow! - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Mary, This is excellent! I hope it is just the first of MANY! Welcome to the Corner Pub, Please sit down and tell us more! Great first post! Dennis :^)< !signature--> Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 08-07-2000).] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Welcome to the Corner Pub, Mary. This is a beautifully sad piece. Well done too! I'm looking forward to more of your poetry here. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I agree with ellie, beautifully sad. Lots of levels of meaning in there, very well done!  |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Welcome to the Pub. I'm sure you'll love it here. I know I do. Great first piece. Dawn |
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MaryArlet Junior Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 15Phoenix, Arizona, USA |
Thanks for all of the wonderful replies!! They mean alot to me! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Welcome to passions! You made quite the entrance with this senryu, a bittersweet read, well written and expressed. You have the talent for haikus and senryus so do share more! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mary- You KNOW I like this one. Welcome to the pub, my friend. love ya, vicky "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and a very good one...welcome to passions!! |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
So few words, yet they tear into me like talons into frightened prey! Welcome to the Corner Pub! I await more! ~~Jamie   |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions and The Corner Pub! I can't wait to see more of your work if it's all as great as this |
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