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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Bright red rose so lovely to see Expresses my heart so easily The shape, the color, a smell so sweet Tis all the things that i cannot be A single rose given to thee By a heart longing to be free Says I love you for all to see Praying that you'll always love me I cherish the tender love from she That holds my soul with lock and key Mistake me not, for i gave it free Mind, body, and soul, all willingly How many words could i write to thee To express my love for all to see Alas, they all fall short i deem For the words of my heart, none shall see but she. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Majestic, I like this expression of love and devotion. Well written! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Love the feeling deep inside, The one your post brings alive, Love is great among the gifts, From tender sigh to warm caress.  Loved reading this great emotion. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Thanks to both of you..i appreciate your comments.... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Darkened Treasures Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 18nj |
Roses have been used for years to represent love and still I never tire of it, you have done it as well as any other...bravo! |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
yes, like so many other's i have used the red rose in my poetry. but i just cant help it..hehehe. thanks for the comment.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Soooo romantic and flowingly tender. Your heart speaks here and so eloquently too! ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
thanks ellie for the very touching reply...it means alot to me.. "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
this is a charmer...really cool. Jon |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
Thanks Jon...My wife enjoyed it..hehe "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful words Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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