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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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(more in the saga of abc..this for my friend as well...!) i long to talk to you to ramble as you listen to hear your voice to borrow your smile-- but i dare not; i would ask of you to wound me. i would ask that you take my exposed heart from my sleeve and crush it once again-- even though, you have since offered your healing oitment-- it will take time to truly trust again... i dare not try to run while still trying to shake this limp. as brushing off debris, i still lick the wounds inflicted by the vicious fall. i wont ask you to push me down again but i long for you to stand beside me-- as once you did... -dgvarner "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- Again, OUCH! Really felt this one. Sorry you're having such a hard time right now. Wish I could be there for you. As usual, really love the poem.  love ya much, tricks "I have read your words, and within them I have found your heart. -vlraynes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It takes time to heal, sometimes a very long time. Great poem! Denise |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
dg, Really good read. You pulled me right into feeling your pain. Well done! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Oh this one bleeds, a painful but well written poem. i would ask of you to wound me. i would ask that you take my exposed heart from my sleeve and crush it once again-- even though, you have since offered your healing oitment-- it will take time to truly trust again... "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
This is beautifully written...but the pain i felt when i read it... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I too can feel your pain as I read this. Brings about memories of my own of a not to distant time. Dawn |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I too could feel the pain in this lovely poem especially could relate to how hard it is to trust again. Time heals. ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ok..really...i responded to NONE of you ..and i think thats incredibly rude! sorry....  i guess after i wrote this one, i'd sifted enough to calm my soul for a little while.. but i do very much appreciate your comments!!  dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
dg, as some of the others said, I felt your pain here too. Here's hoping you peace soon. Juls |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks juls and peace to you as well dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Well DGV wounds do heal ......but some leave a scar...but some scars are unseen ...this is a poem of healing I think ...very nice. Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thank you JON always glad to get your thoughts dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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