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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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sunset tide a seagull floats over the crumbling castle |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This painted a lovely picture in my mind! I love anything to do with the sea! Denise |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
Goodness, this board moves fast, I sorta forgot that I posted this, thanks denise, I'm a water person myself and a lot of my poems have water images in them, what can say the water calls me. Lady Nogs |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
This is lovely! The crumbling castle was a delightful inclusion. I'm usually so long winded! I've never written Haiku. A Limerick is actually the shortest form I've ever tried to follow. Every time I see a cool Haiku, I say to myself "'monna try that one day." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lady N, Beautiful word picture capturing a special moment! I can almost taste the salty breeze. WELL DONE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lady N, Beautiful word picture capturing a special moment! I can almost taste the salty breeze. WELL DONE! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A beautiful image. "To the centre of the city where all roads meet, waiting for you,To the depths of the ocean where all hopes sank, searching for you," Joy divison |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
This lovely Lady Nogs, takes me back to memories of building sand castles on Blackpool beach many years ago. A lovely atmosphere you have created in so few words.  |
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