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wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

0 posted 2000-08-02 03:45 PM

exhale...

...interlude
a moment in time
between
the beginning...the end
hanging still
...gone

interlude
a question comes to mind
this moment of ours
was it the beginning of the end
or the end of a beginning
or the middle of journey
that has no memory
of previous stops
only to meet
to lose again
till we see again
in another time
in time, or
was this the last
of our mingled pasts

interlude
perhaps this time
in time
was a gross mistake
a spatial hiccup
the cosmic goof
not meant to be
do the gods laugh?
at our supposed destinies
our stealing of moments
of seeing
what could be
was to be
never to be
Should I/we be happy
that we enjoyed
an interlude
or curse the passion
of what can not be
for we are out of
time
in time
accidental interlude
a moment lost
found
lost
found
lost
found
lost
found...

...inhale

[This message has been edited by Lady Noggins (edited 08-02-2000).]

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

1 posted 2000-08-02 03:56 PM

(i was going to copy and paste right here the part that hit me the most..but i nearly pasted the whole darn thing!! )

oh yeah..this i really really like...really i do!! (can you tell??)

very well written..all the questions--i can feel them, been in the same space with them, know where they come from...needing answers, needing to question, yet not really wanting either..for fear you'll find what you'd rather not..SIGH...WOW!

yep..this one i really like...great job!!

dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2000-08-02 04:08 PM

quote:
oh yeah..this i really really like...really i do!! (can you tell??)

Goodnes, yes I can, such enthusiam for my words, you are overwelming me.

Thanks!!

Lady Nogs

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

3 posted 2000-08-02 04:41 PM

really enjoyed the poem, its tone is like a breath itself. well written.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

4 posted 2000-08-02 08:04 PM

thanks brian, glad that you enjoyed it

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2000-08-02 11:31 PM

Lady Nogs-
What dgvarner said, and then some!!!

  I LOVE THIS!  I too have been there, felt
  that, asked that...  Can truely relate
  to this one.  AWESOME!!  Oh, and did I
  mention, I LOVE THIS!

Thanks for sharing this with us.

-vicky

"I have read your words, and within them
I have found your heart.
-vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-02-2000).]

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

6 posted 2000-08-03 09:49 AM

Lovely...surreal...This has a calming effect on me! Magical, beth! *hugz*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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