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Gold Odyssey Haiku

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-08-02 03:15 PM

Dandelion gold
Turns fluff white in so few days
Wind blows seed away!

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2000-08-02 06:43 PM

Dennis; Wow! You are definitly on a roll!
You got a Haiku heaven going here, and this one is just that, heavenly! Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-08-02 11:07 PM

Dennis~

Little parachutes
One puff ... they accelerate
Riding on the wind

*Now cut that out !
You get me on a roll with these little charmers.
Your talent is showing admirably.
Thanks for the inspiration !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2000-08-03 09:37 AM

What a magical day, Dennis!!*S*

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

4 posted 2000-08-03 10:21 AM

oh those pesky haikus, once you catch the bug you are lost...

Nicely done . . . let the winds blow

Lady Nogs

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2000-08-03 10:06 PM

Dennis-
As with all your haiku,
gotta love this one.

  A beautiful little picture.

  -vicky

"I have read your words, and within
them I have read your heart.
  -vlraynes

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

6 posted 2000-08-04 07:23 PM

oh i do love dandelions! and this little piece does them justice!

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

7 posted 2000-08-05 05:12 PM

Ain't it just like us
It's colored top starts thinning
Turns white, then bye, bye!

How truly a danelion can be a metaphor of our own life experience--Great Haiku, Dennis!

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