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wordancer
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0 posted 2000-07-31 06:02 PM




spring breeze
over canted tombstones . . .
faded words


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midnightblues
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1 posted 2000-08-01 02:53 AM


Wow this is exceptional, Lady Nogs! Melancholic and surreal......very nice... *S*


love, michelle


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allan
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since 2000-04-09
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2 posted 2000-08-01 03:05 PM


Oh yes. I liked this very much. Such atmosphere in so few words.

Your nom de plume is superb also!


dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
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3 posted 2000-08-01 03:34 PM



love this, lady!  it brings to mind an old cemetary i used to frequent while in college...i do love cemetaries..especially old ones!  

great little read  

dg


"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran


wordancer
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4 posted 2000-08-03 10:33 AM


dgvarner I love old cemetaries too, this is a revision of a old haiku of mine that came from wandering in one last year.

midnightblues/allen, thanks so much for your lovely responses

Lady Nogs


passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-12-25 11:42 AM



wordancer
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6 posted 2004-12-25 03:20 PM


...so why the sad face?
effjayel
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7 posted 2008-02-07 08:55 AM


  This is great!
wordancer
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8 posted 2008-02-07 09:50 AM


oh...a blast from the past, thanks for your reply, I'm now looking at this with more experienced eyes, with a thought towards revision.


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