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vlraynes
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0 posted 2000-07-30 02:15 PM


  
  you smiled
     my heart grew wings
         and soared
  you spoke
     my whole being quivered
         with every syllable
  as a boy
     you captured
          my curiosity
  as a man
     you capture  
          my soul

            -vlraynes


  "...until you have read the
   verse on his heart, you have
   not truely met the poet.
            -vlraynes



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-07-30 03:21 PM


Vicky~
This is just lovely.
I sure am enjoying your thoughts.
~*Marge*~



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vlraynes
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2 posted 2000-07-30 03:44 PM



Marge-
Thank you for your encouragement.
I love your poetry, and really
appreciate your comments.  

-vlraynes (vicky)

"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet.   -vlraynes

dgvarner
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3 posted 2000-07-30 03:56 PM


tricks..i responded to this once..just before i got kicked off my 'puter...wish i could remember what i sd...heehee

very romantic..i like i like...    funny what that smile can do ..especially if thats the moment you realize....YOWWY!  i'm not just curious anymore!!

  dg



"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran

vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-07-30 04:48 PM




dg-
  I hate when that happens (getting kicked
  off the 'puter)     Thanks for reading
  and responding.  This was actually for
  a friend I went to elementary school with
  and ran into years later.  It was
  definitely a 'YOWWY' moment.  

  luv ya,
     tricks  

  "...until you have read the verse on his
   heart, you have not truely met the poet.
                     -vlraynes

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
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5 posted 2000-07-31 05:50 AM


vicky this is sooo sweet!!! *S*


love, michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-08-01 01:22 AM



Michelle-
  Thanks for the kind words.
   Glad you like this one.  

  love,
    vicky
  

"...until you have read the verse
on his heart, you have not truely
met the poet.
                 -vlraynes

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7 posted 2004-12-25 11:45 AM


oh yes!
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