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Jon Mewett
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since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

0 posted 2000-07-30 08:42 AM

Sometimes I hear a second pass
As I lay my mind open
To the universe
I see the eternal
Waiting for the lyric line
And racing from the past
Shadows of yesterday
Cast their spell
On my hazy today
Looking for tomorrow
When I will
Once again refreshed
Straighten up
And head for the Sun

Jon Mewett

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-07-30 05:38 PM

I don't know why I love you but I do!

Jon

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-07-30 10:17 PM

I've had a few moments like that myself! Great writing, Jon!

Denise

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

3 posted 2000-07-31 04:35 AM

Thanx for reading and your comments are most kind as usual Denise...

Jon

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2000-07-31 06:28 AM

Wow powerful piece, Jon! love it!

love, michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

5 posted 2000-07-31 10:32 AM

Love this Jon!!!

"Once again refreshed
Straighten up
And head for the Sun."

These words make my heart soar for some reason.

EWDrake
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 183
NC, USA

6 posted 2000-07-31 10:39 AM

You have describe catching a mental "20 winks" and refreshing the soul within...
Nice power nap for the imagination. *S*

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2000-07-31 04:26 PM

JON really liked the poem. some great images

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-08-01 03:17 AM

Thanx everybody......

Jon

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2000-08-01 10:39 AM

"Shadows of yesterday
Cast their spell
On my hazy today
Looking for tomorrow..."

jon..certain yesterdays can linger with us for a while, as we go thru the motions of our today...just waiting for tomorrow when we can truly live again

good one..

dg

ps..i responded to your reply (in voices) to my "moment" poem

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

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