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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Sometimes I hear a second pass As I lay my mind open To the universe I see the eternal Waiting for the lyric line And racing from the past Shadows of yesterday Cast their spell On my hazy today Looking for tomorrow When I will Once again refreshed Straighten up And head for the Sun Jon Mewett |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I don't know why I love you but I do! Jon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I've had a few moments like that myself! Great writing, Jon! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx for reading and your comments are most kind as usual Denise... Jon |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow powerful piece, Jon! love it! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Love this Jon!!! "Once again refreshed Straighten up And head for the Sun." These words make my heart soar for some reason. |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
You have describe catching a mental "20 winks" and refreshing the soul within... Nice power nap for the imagination. *S* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
JON really liked the poem. some great images "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx everybody...... Jon |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"Shadows of yesterday Cast their spell On my hazy today Looking for tomorrow..." jon..certain yesterdays can linger with us for a while, as we go thru the motions of our today...just waiting for tomorrow when we can truly live again good one.. dg ps..i responded to your reply (in voices) to my "moment" poem "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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