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Brenda Hall Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 88Texas,USA |
Hearstrings,began to lose control As memories,burn into our soul Our hearts have often touched you know As our life together continues to grow Lonely miles blend into lonely years Love and laughter,crying lots of tears The times and miles pull us away, We miss each other,too much to say! The feelings we felt and listened to Will preserve out love forever true And heartbeats,we have often shared Clearly proves, we truly cared! Shared time together,shall return With many bridges to cross and burn Life continues together,as we once knew As memories of love,flourish anew! By:Brenda Hall [This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (edited 07-29-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i feel this, brenda...this says something to me right now.... and i hope its true, that "shared time together shall return..." nice poem dg "Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you." -Kahlil Gibran |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Brenda, Wonderful poem, I enjoyed, welcome to passions I hope you enjoy your stay |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Brenda, This is a truly beautiful poem of love and companionship- you have my vote. David |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very nicely written with good strong emotion. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
good poem you showed alot of feelings in it. you got a vote from me! ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Yup this is so special, Brenda! Here's my vote *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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