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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Do you mind me, popping in, breathless, for a spot of gin? I long to find some comfort here... A hug, to let me in... Can we sing songs? (should we roll dice?) can I belong just for one night? and Billiards, oh... I'd let you win... again, again, again, I grin... until I beat you thrice... and jukebox sing the breadth of me keeping death-gong of my time... Did you mind me popping in? A shot to go--now kiss me--bye... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 07-27-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
We all need a serenity breeze, I wonder who would say no to you popping by??? regards, sudhir |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
this sounds like FUN  Jon |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
This is a very whimsical and lighthearted poem. Liked it very much Serenity. Rich |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you can run but ya cant hide you know Im always close behind How could ya sneak out with out me... how come you get the kisses and leave me the poetry. Ok I forgive ya ...lets play some darts... throw them at the poets who broke our hearts  then well turn up the juke and sing and dance be home early they said..HA..not a chance We will pull up a stool and toast poetry then we'll drink till were both in serenity ******* Bartender....were outta pretzels over here  and se'ns hoggin all the limes (hehehe) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, I'm opening all the windows and doors to make sure I get every bit of serenity breeze that I can!! And it's ok if you beat me at billards. . . I like darts better anyway! wonderful, my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is a great poem! Beautifully written! ...beth You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sudhir---thanks so much m'friend, was feeling a little "restless", so thought I'd drop in for a nightcap and a few laughs... Jon------it is FUN--but only if the company is good...Next time, I'll buy ya a drink... rich-----somehow, it isn't really like that anymore, but a nice memory from the non-memory archive, y'know? JM-------ya gotta be READY--next time--we'll go dancing...and limes? Who needs limes? LOL...just line 'em up... (serenity can be an EXPENSIVE date!) Sven-----okay...but I'm dangerous with darts! Everybody stand back! and whadyya mean you don't "wind" up to throw darts? (ouch...sorry Sveetie, let me take that out of your back...) beth-----thanks for the fun...your turn to play the jukebox...oh, and that guy down there bought you a drink...oh.. well, it WAS a drink...guess I owe you one now... Later, good people...and bartender, give everybody a round on me!!! |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
What a delightful piece, serenity! *huGz* Such a playful and cheerful feeling! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Very light and enjoyable serenity. enjoyable piece and I'm glad you stopped by. Can I buy you a drink? LOLKevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
oops...hehe [This message has been edited by Majestic (edited 08-03-2000).] |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
hum, we'll need salt and just a touch of lime heaven forbid we forget hose' just pop in any time Enjoyed your poem...thanks for the read... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks everybody! what the heck--it's early yet, think I can hang out for a few more---keleith, sure, babes, bring it on...and send one down to beth, too, I owe her one...now... DARTS ANYONE? |
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