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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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You there before me Locked in this moment of time Captured by your eyes Hoplessly helpless Lost within your warm embrace Keep me here for always Take me for keeps Forever in love with you You my dream so true "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I love this, Justbleu!!! Hopelessly Helpless... Gosh this is sooo romantic!! *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Being a twenty-something single female who lives in a not-so-romantic world, I often dream what true love is like..You have painted a portrait so lovely in my mind of how true love should be! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
JustBleu, This is so good! You've captured a Special moment with so few words. Well Done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Justbleu....... This really is special, my friend!! I'm new to the art of Haiku, but I love the way of putting over a thought with few words..... I like this very much!!< !signature--> ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Gosh, Justbleu, you do have a knack for these love poems  this is so short and sweet moi like muchly, esp "You my dream so true"  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Haikus are new to me...I was just seeing what I could do...and you all seem to like it!! Thank You!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Just lovely, Bridgette! Denise |
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