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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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Here it is, LD...err I tried oki? love, michelle Wings of darkness come to me Grant me this tranquility As I walk along this shore Let me see Heaven's galore Of starry riddles in the air And shiny pieces of dreams up there Such a lovely night like this Let my spirit frolick with ease In this dark tranquility Joy and hope and peace within My heart sings a tuneless melody Telling a surreal love story In this night of tranquility Shall I tell him I'm waiting for him? Quietly I sit here and sigh Such is the beauty of the night My heart feels like its old and tired Might be the tranquil setting painted by night Timeless, blameless, shameless thoughts Fleet by astoundingly as I realise Having sat down here throughout the night Tranquility pulled me to greater heights! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Michelle, I love it! Any tranquility we can find in life is perfect, be it listening to the chirping of a new born birdie, or to be lost in the vast universe of something, someplace, or some person we totally love. Thanks for meeting the challenge, you did a marvelous job.  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"Tranquility pulled me to greater heights" Michelle; I love this line and your poem is exquisite! So dreamy and so real, that I felt like I was on that beach too. Beautifully written. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Thanks gloria and ellie! I feel so pampered by ur sweetness!! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
MnBlues, What a wonderful hypnotic trance you paint here with your gentle brush strokes. I am enchanted by your talent! Well done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem! I especially liked the last verse.  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dennis- Thanks! Ur praise sends my heart soaring *S* Poet deVine- That verse juz came suddenly...I seem to belief in it too...tranquility always gives me new philosophies in life...lifts my weary spirits If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Many people become blinded by darkness and that makes them uneasy and frightened, You have a way of seeing beauty and brightness in the dark shadows...I can only hope to accomplish that myself someday! Excellent poem :0) You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Lady Lost, I've always appreciated darkness...it has a calming and serene effect on my nerves...*S* Hope that u'll be able to benefit from it when life gets on ur nerves...Thanks for ur beautiful compliments, I appreciate it very much! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love this post. So very "tranquil" in its imagery. I want to sit there too and feel the peace and calm. Wonderfully written. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
WildChild I'm so delighted to see ur kind comments! *huGz* Thank u so beary much! *S* This means alot to me! love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Michelle, this is extremely beautiful so much did I enjoy the tranquil thoughts... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Thanks Sudhir! U made mi day.....*S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Michelle,being a person who much rather burn the midnight night oil than study in the daylight..this post speaks to me..yes, i like to calmly sit in a quiet place and reflect on a "night of tranquility" too |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Yeah kaile me too! Worse still I have insomnia...so that leaves me dreamy and full of philosophies *S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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