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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA ![]() |
Ther are two < !signature-->splashing water fountains, surrounded by every color of impatient. The tea roses are blooming pink. Tranquility abounds. The white lattice arbor is a bloom with purple climatis. The tranquility fills my being. Stargazer lilies and petunias of white and deep purple and pink, fragrance supreme. It's all so lovely that I'm almost in a tranquil coma! Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very very beautiful, Ellie! You've painted such a lovely picture of tranquility! Challenge well met! ![]() Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Ellie, Your tranquil coma is contagious, and addictive. What a beautiful place you describe. Thanks for meeting the challenge and taking me to your wonderful tranquilness. ![]() |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very beautiful and tranquil well written ...stargazer lilies hmmmm never heard of them before now intrigued by the name ... off to search the web to see if I can find a picture of 'em ... then I might just have to order some seeds? bulbs? lol ![]() |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite tranquil and so very lovely this place you write....very nice!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
So very pretty, ellie! hmm I'll haf to think twice bout posting mine....*S* If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
What a beautiful poem..the words flow so graciously... Another wonderful poem from a wonderful poet! You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Dear Ellie, WOW! what a beautiful tranquil scene you have painted here with your words. I can smell the flowers!! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
not being in that lovely place you have described, i may not be in a tranquil coma now but a smile this poem definitely brought me ![]() thx for sharing what's dear to you ![]() |
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