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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Reality Who do I think I am anyway? Dare I have an idea with a tiny voice! Not good enough, bad idea! Who gives me the right to think, concern myself with others? Sorry, back to my shelter, protection from my pain. I stupidly walk in these doors to have them slammed in my face. No more risks, no more kindness, reality hurts too much! Sorry all, those that wanted a Form Forum it won't be happening, too many against it is what I hear. I really don't know why I even tried cause I knew deep down it wouldn't happen and I would feel hurt. Anyway, I apologize for getting anyones hopes up, for it won't be happening. :..( [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 07-10-2000).] |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dearest Dreamer Don't be sad You're disappointed I know But life's like that No form forum But the passions still rule For one fine day Your dream'll come true I might not understand What's a haiku (sorrie i really don't) But I can feel What it means to many of you Rest assured The others will see What you have tried to do And results are not everything Here's my comfort, and my shoulder to cry on. Pull yourself together... and treat me to more of your poems...I'll like to understand what kind of poems are considered haikus...and I'll love know more about it! love,michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
This is a great piece. I feel your pain as I read. If there's anything I can do let me see. I'll do what I can to help you. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Midnightblues: Thank you, your poem is so sweet, I appreciate your kindness. I don't understand Haiku's or any of them either, all I know is there are some who enjoy them. I was just trying to get them a special place. Kevin: Thank you for your compliment, and a bigger thank you for your help  |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear friend; You get a capital "E" for effort. Don't give up hope, dreams have a funny way of happening when you least expect it. Love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ell |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks for trying, Gloria! I'm sure it was appreciated by those who wanted a separate forum. But please don't feel hurt because it's not happening. Maybe it will sometime in the future. Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Gloria, I don't have a problem posting Haikus or Tankas in other forums, Thanks for going to bat for us though! I for one appreciate it, and that is my reality! Nice poem! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Im sorry you are feeling as though you have gotten few hard slaps on your face but pls know that i for one appreciate the efforts you have gone through for us...being one who usually post haiku and tankas more often than not, i thank you for taking up this quest for us THANK YOU FOR TRYING!!  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
LD, No more risks, no more kindness, reality hurts too much! Oh i know this feeling but there are times when we risk and we recieve just rewards and it makes all the pain worth while. thanks for sharing this wonderfully written poem. Take care and if you ever want to talk... "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Good poem about reality. It can really sometimes be that way. Believe me, I know. --the little one |
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