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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
The trusses to the old-town bridge are moldy old and rotten. All the people here have mostly been forgotten. Hidden from the future,sewed up to the past. Expecting their town to eternally last. The buildings tumbled rumbled down. Dusty boarded window town..... The world forgot them,left behind the rest. They don't realize they left behind the best. The old times when life was hard,but serene. Unprepared for what the next generation brings. It’s a sad end to a song, But the old time morality is gone. And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This brings back a lot of sweet memories from my summer camp. Thanks for the memories. Maybe someday I'll take a stab at putting those memories into poetry.. Beautiful poem Dawn |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
sometimes I wish nothing more than to live in a world time forgot...you've painted a beautiful picture... if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great writing piece brings back lots of memories in me. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow what can I say? Nostalgic and enchantiing...I can almost picture your story in my mind...truely divine *S* |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
I liked this very much Swåmpy. I have the same nostalgic feelings about that old way of life. My home town, a village really, was like that - when you came back to it it felt like being surrounded by a beautiful warm cocoon. It isn't like that any more, it has 'developed' into a modern town. Sadly. Thanks for putting in words what I'm sure a lot of us feel inside.  |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
THanks everyone =] i appreciate the comments...i know this has happened everywhere and it's so sad =[ thanks again. swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a very sad poem on the passing of time, feeled with emotions and feelings of loss. wonderfully written. "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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