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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-07-04 11:09 AM

*Just a simple message*

~LIFE'S SEASONS~

Seek not
an eternity of Summer and Spring,
but, allow Autumn breeze to carry you away
into the glistening snowfalls,
for, Winter too
has beauty,
as, life is a variety
of different colours and seasons

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly

kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

1 posted 2000-07-04 11:12 AM

Such a simple message with the deep meaning.

Great job.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2000-07-04 03:40 PM

dear Melissa: This poem is so beautiful and filled with wisdom. Pefectly lovely! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 2000-07-04 06:58 PM

Yes! This is so true.

Joy

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-07-05 02:52 AM

Melissa,
Excellent message! Well written too! I liked this a lot! Dennis :^)

[This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 07-05-2000).]

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

5 posted 2000-07-05 06:33 PM

Melissa - So simple, yet so full of meaning. Beautiful poem. Bonnie

chibi_dragon
Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 58

6 posted 2000-07-05 06:54 PM

Can't be expressed simpler: beautiful. Your message of time seems to connect to everyone.

--the cute dragon

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-07-05 09:15 PM

Very beautiful, Melissa!

Denise

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2000-07-09 06:34 PM

Melissa~
Just lovely ... just lovely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

9 posted 2000-07-12 08:02 AM

Delightful portrayal...nature's beauty makes up for life's losses and pain, don't they? *S* This is beautiful!

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2000-07-12 11:34 PM

point taken..now if only i can remember this in my darkest hours

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2000-07-13 12:20 PM

Wonderful Melissa. . . you've done a great job showing a lot in a little space. . .

Excellent. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-12-25 11:36 AM

well said

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