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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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Understanding “Like a sculpture carved from ink,” she whispers; “my paper sculptor.” “Words set in stone chained with others making a whole.” “Ideas, feelings, what might have been, gifted an immortality.” “Forever etched upon my heart, my soul...” she cries. “Just a simple paper formed of water pressed upon wood.” “You and yours turn it into magic captured is our humanity.” She sighs, “It’s love oh it’s love, my love! Extraordinary!” She is rewarded with kiss, perhaps snuggle she understands. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yes she does understand! Thank you, Wendy! bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bleeding: The wonderful gift of have your poetry understood by your beloved. This is so beautiful! Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 To have your words understood and written upon a loved ones heart is definitely worth a reward of gratitude. Bob <>< |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nice to see you finally, Daniel! Understanding is priceless indeed! Great poem! You've got my vote!  Denise |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Great piece there is no greater joy than to be able to share such a gift. Great Piece. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I echo everyone else's thoughts. That is such a good feeling inside when someone understands. Joy |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
What a beautiful poem.. yeah.. great when someone understands, and she is right about all that.. ^_^ lovely.. for the Lady Wendy.. ^^ Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
isn't it priceless when someone understyands your work? i mean many try, but few really see what you have seen...almost as if there are certain people who see and hear on the same bizarre frequency that we do??? Daniel...aka: bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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