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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
the not-quite-blackness flickered and through it splattered vibrant shimmering colours, patterns, vibrations, crazy flights of animation, soaring rejoicing swoops of joy, jagged zig-zags of pain - all of you - all of us - right here - now |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Allan; romantic ane ethereal. I like this. Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This one is really psychedelic, allan. Love the format, too! I wonder what it was inspired by Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! I enjoyed this Allan! Denise |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
To the point. Good writing Allen Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thanks all! Funnily enough Lotharingia it's not what you might think... I wrote it a while back about a group of people similar to this group - the 'Brainstorms' community. And I feel the same about our little community here, so I thought it appropriate. In short it's about all of us and our interactions online - happy, sad, creative, friendly and nicely crazy too... Allan [This message has been edited by allan (edited 07-04-2000).] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Oh! I thought it was about your recent trip to the love parade. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sums it up perfectly Allan. really enjoyed this piece. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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