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kelieth
Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 314
Normal IL - USA

0 posted 2000-06-30 08:07 AM

Simple Things

I strain to hear,
The simple sounds.
Like the rain falling down.

I long to feel,
The simple touch.
Like the sun and all it's love.

Sometimes its not,
Easy to see.
The wonderful beauty in simple things.

Kevin

"Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals."

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 2000-06-30 08:13 AM

Kevin, Wow, this poem speaks volumes with so little words. You've captured the simplicity of life, yet shown it's complicated side also. Thanks for sharing this, I love it.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2000-06-30 08:14 AM

Kevin: Your poem is "simply" beautiful! Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

3 posted 2000-06-30 08:18 AM

Keleith - Simplicity at its finest. This is wonderful. Bonnie

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2000-06-30 12:10 PM

Kevin,
Beauty surrounds us if we but pause to see.
Wonderful poem!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-07-01 03:19 AM

yes most people overlook the small simple things that mean so much thanks for posting this and reminding us all.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

6 posted 2000-07-01 03:27 AM

I love this, kaile.. such a great poem.. yeah, the simple things in life are beautiful, but often ones eye skips over them..

Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2000-07-09 06:48 PM

Kelieth~
Simplistically stated -
magnanimous in thought.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2000-07-10 08:09 AM

I linger to read
The simple words
Radiating from a simple poem such as this

profound wisdom within "simplicity"...love it!

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

9 posted 2000-07-11 11:01 AM

Hey kevin, ur poem opens our 'third eye'! Taking our time, making an effort to appreciate...its actually a luxury! Love it! *S*

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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