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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
TWILIGHT I long to see, The wakening sight. Of the sky, In mid-twilight. To see the graceful, Shades of blue. As if it were, Calling you. To visit some, Distant place. To let your mind. Touch wisdom's grace. I love to see, The first of stars. It moves the strings, Within my heart. I hear a voice, Softly say. Now's the time. Reflect the day. So I think, Of good and bad. I learn so much, Each time I have. The moment of peace, Closeing each day, As my worries, Drift away. Tomorrow night, I long to see. This wondrous time, Enlightens me. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kevin, WOW! A beautiful reflection on a special time of day. A time of renewal and inspiration as well as a time of release from burdens! I like the simplicity and imagery of this one! Dennis :^) [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
I agree with Dennis, and 2 add this poem had a beautiful calming affect ![]() To be who u are and become what u are capable of is the only goal worth living. ~Alvin Ailey Poetry & Friendship PrincessPoet |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
How wonderfully peaceful....Love the serenity it gives. Bonnie |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Kevin, Wow, how delightful this poem is, makes me want to look up at the stars right now, but it's raining ![]() |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful moment of serenity. Love it. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes the day can always be so great and you point that out here very well. enjoyed it much and hope to see more. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Kevin, this is great.. well done! ^_^ Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kelieth~ As twilight begins to surround my day - I know just what you mean - awesome thoughts ~ 'I hear a voice, Softly say. Now's the time. Reflect the day.' And I sit in earnest time of reflection. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts in this, Kevin! Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
~Kevin what a lovely piece....Twilight is a special time of day for me!! Nicely done!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I love this kevin! Very surreal and inspirational. If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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