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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. ![]() |
Disposed to compose Darn, cerebral lethargy Poetic Gridlock! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dennis; There is no such thing!!!! You've written this so well, but I'm a firm believer that when you put the Giver of the gift in charge, His inspirations are endless. The ultimate Muse! Love, Sis <) ![]() Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. ellie LeJeune |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
I knew you could do it,Dennis...brought a much-needed smile on my face here ![]() you always make my day with your poetry...do post more ![]() Btw, of couse, i remember your writer's block tanka...personally i feel you should post it in VoW...certain you will get lots of votes ![]() will do my own challenge to repay you for your superb effort....hope the muse stays with moi ![]() |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
excellent Dennis, inspirational in fact. "but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art" Dylan Thomas. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've said it all, Dennis! ![]() Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, my!!! Been there done that. Hated it! This is good!! ![]() |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Yes, really Good & like Brian said, Inspiring! Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Dennis - How many times have I been there... you sure captured those moments in perfect simplicity. Bonnie |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dennis, I like, I like!! Good 'en! |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Good brief description of the terrible plague. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
bringing this up to the top again with A Poet's Tragedy of my own....hope you like ![]() Pen poised in sweat hand~ Mouth pouts for elusive muse~ Waiting for the kill! thanx for responding to my challenge so beautifully ![]() |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thank you for ALL your kind replies, obviously I'm not the only one who has been there and has gotten the tee shirt! LOL Kaile , I like your work but this last one you wrote is too much on the Dark Side for my taste, LOL Thanks again my gridlock friends! LOL [This message has been edited by Dennis L. White (edited 06-29-2000).] |
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