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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Freedom (Poet deVine's Challenge) Freedom is my Angel divine dictator for my flowing thoughts Dressed up innocence inspired creator dancing in disguise Freedom is my Angel friend forever exhibiting life's treasure Kaleidoscope of illusions reaching wherever kissing desires own sphere [This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A challenge well met...nice way to describe what freedom means to you. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
liked this muchly....such unique original description here...like the 1st stanza best Freedom is my Angel divine dictator for my flowing thoughts like "divine dictator" and the truth these few lines speak   btw,u may want to read my attempt Freedom in 10 words in Open#8 |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written and challenge well met. "but for the lovers, their arms Round the griefs of the ages, Who pay no praise or wages Nor heed my craft or art" Dylan Thomas. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed thoughts, Esmeralda! Denise |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
hi, esmeralda This is such a profound poem, I really like it. I mean your poems show a lot of maturity (as opposed to mine which I personally as trash. ^^). Good poems, may liberty be with you. -James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within it. |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Beautiful as always Esmeralda Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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