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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand 
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I haven't written a lot of haiku, here are a couple tho, as kelieth mentioned he hadn't read any.. Flirtatious flowers Smiling at a passing bee Flutter their lashes. Trapped beneath the sky, Clouds so teasing, gently float Jump up, I can’t fly. Lynne  "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Lynne, Excellent, Please grace us with some more of these. Encore, Encore! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
These are so good! Such graceful use of language. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I needed a Haiku fix...and quite a lovely one at that! More, please! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Lynne~ These are so well written. I absolutely loved the first one, it is one of the best haikus that I have ever read, what a lovely way to personify the flower like that, it's a unique take on the situation Please write some more for us!Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
*big smiles!* Thank you! Well, indeed I shall have 2 write some more then! ^_^ actually, I think I have saved a few of m earlier ones.. somewhere.. ^^ thank you all for such lovely replies.. Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
with haiku as great as these, its a wonder why you don't write some more to share with us....i agree with Melissa--i am hooked on haiku(as you probably know) and its really hard to provide a refreshingly new take on something we see everyday...but you have done very well with both your haiku and personally, i think the first one is a WINNER!  more haiku, please! |
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