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Pond rain-spotted grey

allan
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since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-06-20 05:23 PM

Pond rain-spotted grey
mist, cloud, sunhine reflected
all passes, all remains

[This message has been edited by allan (edited 06-20-2000).]

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

1 posted 2000-06-20 09:17 PM

I enjoyed your interesting haiku-and you make and interesting statement with it too. It is amazing how much many things seem to remain as constants- though other things are in a constant state of flux--Very good! David

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

2 posted 2000-07-13 08:22 AM

mist, cloud, sunshine...my favourite icons of nature!!! *S* pretty

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

3 posted 2000-07-16 06:56 AM

Did I miss this one?
Wonderful image. Except that I don't need to be reminded of rain at the moment.

I especially like this bit:
all passes, all remains
Really mystical!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-07-16 10:48 AM

I believe deleeme has said it all

glad i didnt miss this lovely haiku

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-07-16 04:15 PM

Very good indeed, Allan!

Denise

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