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season(Kaile's Challenge)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-06-20 03:06 AM

          Flowers bloom
      And withstand the heat
           Covered by
          brown leaves
only in coldness to find the death
            they meet

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

1 posted 2000-06-20 03:35 AM

Nice imagery JJ.

Like it

Jon

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2000-06-20 07:22 AM

love this....esp the way you carry a single image(flowers) through all 4 seasons...very creative indeed

Breeze blows
     through spring

a wonderful relief
     in summer

fluttering leaves
     aplenty
      in autumn

transformed into
    cold harsh
     winter gale

for you,Johnson...thanx for the inspiration

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-20 12:20 PM

thanks for your replies glad you liked my work i'll try to post more here from time to time.

I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul

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