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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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There was once a hen called Patch Sparkling golden eggs she always hatched All the hens were very sad Desperate, they all laid eggs mad But alas!no one else was her match! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Your limerick is well alotted, You posted it and I bought it No need to explain, Why good can cause pain 'Cause when you got it-you just got it! I thing that gold egg-lay and You, have both Got it!!! David< !signature--> "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) [This message has been edited by deleeme (edited 06-16-2000).] |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Cute limerick! Here is one just for u. A stagecoach took off down the road Sopping only for passangers to load Alas, upon going to fast The wheels spun off and were cast Causing havock in the town of Facode! I don't think anyone can make a bad limerick if they follow the ryhme-line rule! Joy |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
I saw nothing wrong with this limrick.  I think it's good.Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
LOL I liked it kaile and you got the most important thing about limerick right....it's funny But, just like haiku, there's a bit more to limerick then just the rhyme and the plot.....follow this link and it will show you the way to Nan's mysterious world..../pip/Forum22/HTML/000067.html Have fun ! |
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